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Ty so they may state that I'm not left unattended Sometimes I wishPhoto DescriptionWhile the cell is sparse and cold at least this one has a bed The figure resting there is too thin; too still the prominent bones the result of long starvation the stillness the product of too much anguish and abuse He watches though An anxious intelligent mind still occupies this frail and failing body one that watches and wonders about the new guard occupying his cell each nightGenre sc Tantalizing setting Tantalizing everything About the only thing I didn't want to know about was the prisoner himself the pieces were all there

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Ience fictionTags futuristic dystopia security guard prison captivity darkWord Count 10361Content warnings violence medical experimentation attempted rape semi explicit descriptions of past abuse and tortureNOTE This story was written as a part of the MM Romance Group's Love Has No Boundaries event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short sto Holy crap I actually cried at the end This is just a short story and I had no idea where it was going It’s brutal I cringed and wanted to shy away and dnf but I’m glad I didn’t I so wish this was full length The Wildwater Walking Club (Book 2 of The Wildwater Walking Club series) inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short sto Holy crap I actually cried at the end This Revanche de la momie, La (Bat Pat, is just a short story and I had no Unorthodox Methods idea where Jazz Moon it was going It’s brutal I cringed and wanted to shy away and dnf but I’m glad I didn’t I so wish this was full length

Angel Martinez À 7 Free read

This edition is no longer available Dear AuthorHe enters my cell daily at ten pm He leaves in the morning at six am He never says a word Never moves from where he sits right beside the thick steel door He does not beat me He doesn't take me to the tiled room at the end of the corridor He doesn't goad me smirk when I wince afterwards cry or scream I'm not sure what he does when I drift off into deep exhausted pain drenched sleep I think he just watches A fixture a securi Perfect execution of the prompt Written with enough darkness and pain mental physical and emotional to get me to become both invested in Tal and then crying with him over his lost chances and shame The guard perfectly handled including his gentle strength and an end which packed sense and relief and was absolutely satisfyingI'm so happy with this


10 thoughts on “Prisoner 374215

  1. says:

    45 starsWow I loved this story Gosh the claustrophobic atmosphere and dreaded feeling of doom had me hanging on to every word Its intense and edgy the hopeless awful gut feeling hit its mark Tal's experience is emotionally fraught and terrifying but don't despair there is hope thank god I thought it was fantastic and the writing is fabulous An awesome read and it perfectly fit the story prompt highly recommended


  2. says:

    This is how it's done This is how you create an intensely claustrophobic ambiance This is how you grab your readers by their throats in a mere 30 pages An excellent prompt and a mostly fantastic execution Strongly recommendedI took away 1 star because I personally found the ending somewhat lacking The prompt explicitly stated that a HEA would not be necessary which I appreciated Especially when it comes to dark stories that also happen to be short it's difficult to avoid a HEA from appearing to be tacked on Yet what did my freaking eye spy? A whopper of a HEA that covered all the Hollywood clichés I think the excerpt from the history book would have lent itself perfectly for a mysterious and slightly sinister ending We all know how history is often altered by governments Especially in times of war when there is a lot at stake and a loss of face is simply unacceptable propaganda runs rampant I'm disappointed that the author did not add a dash of mystery By claiming in a footnote that for example according to the resisters' government the war hero lived his happily ever after but that historical research didn't show evidence of said hero's existence after his supposed escape And that historians are therefore skeptical of the official version of how events unfoldedUhmmaybe I should submit a prompt for an ending next year;p


  3. says:

    Perfect execution of the prompt Written with enough darkness and pain mental physical and emotional to get me to become both invested in Tal and then crying with him over his lost chances and shame The guard perfectly handled including his gentle strength and an end which packed sense and relief and was absolutely satisfyingI'm so happy with this


  4. says:

    425 starsWOW Just WOW I have read several stories by Angel Martinez before but this 10k story is definitely one of the most intense one of the most powerful and one of her BEST Within 10000 words the story painted a vivid dreaded feel of a prisoner his fears his emotional state his desperation But at the same time it also builds that wonderful ray of light in the end of the tunnel in form of Scar the prison guard who keeps watch over Prisoner 374215Science fiction dystopia is not my favorite genre which is part of the reason on why I can't give stars rating However I admit I have no trouble following this enthralling story I hang on to the every word every scene on the edge of my seat until the reveal of the name of Prisoner 374215 and the back story on why he became a prisonerThe romance might be very very subtle this is of story of Prisoner 374215 than romance But the epilogue gives that assurance of happiness after months of being capturedThumbs up Angel


  5. says:

    Tantalizing setting Tantalizing everything About the only thing I didn't want to know about was the prisoner himself the pieces were all there


  6. says:

    Prisoner 374215 is such a poignant and gripping tale for a short story The angst and strife is so uiet yet deep it cuts like a scalpel It's dark without being overly gruesome those who prefer bubbles and rainbow butterflies stories might still uake in their boots from this one but it's not that scary of the grittier abuse happens off scene Was it a tearjerker for me? No but it might be for someBased on the prompt this story hits each mark lovingly Prisoner 374215 has been dehumanized to a basic shell conditioned to forget himself He knows nothing but pain But there's a guard who treats him with kindnessis a trick? Prisoner 374215 is sure it is but he can't help to respond to the small comfort the guard offersThe guard ScarMarcus was spot on I don't want to gush and give away why this story with about 10K words could move you It was so touching There's no sex there's some cuddling and I was super satisfiedI find beauty in this story A great tale A wonderful endingwhispers Yes there's a not so overt HEA but a HEA still the sameJob well done Angel


  7. says:

    Holy crap I actually cried at the end This is just a short story and I had no idea where it was going It’s brutal I cringed and wanted to shy away and dnf but I’m glad I didn’t I so wish this was full length


  8. says:

    Prisoner 374215 is an enthralling short from the LHNB event The prisoner in uestion is being held in a prisontesting facility No clue what he's being tested for but he's becoming weaker by the day Death would be a blessing a welcome reprieve So far though they had refused to let him die Scar is assigned to guard him at night By all outward indications he should be terrified of Scar but strangely enough he's comforted by him Yet Hope any sort of hope was dangerous Scar finds a way to break through to 374215 by provoking memories of who he once was an inspiration to many A strategic genius All of which was stripped from him on fabricated charges by the Andalusian Corporation There's just enough back story to make it engaging; leaves the reader to fill in the blanks I appreciate not having it spoon fed to me Well written I was surprised by the level of investment 37 pgs could generateAnd it's free Bonus


  9. says:

    Claustrophobic terrifying imaginative a sort of dystopian technologic Auschwitz In and of itself that's enough to give me nightmares I love I hate oh fuck it was well done the way 374215 was conditioned and brainwashed and I love how he was able with the help of his future husband to break free of his psychological bindsI have to agree with Tinka here and admit that the ending felt if not tacked on at least a little rushed but I think I would have killed someone if I hadn't gotten my HEA so all in all I'm perfectly satisfied with the fairytale feel of the resolution


  10. says:

    Claustrophobic dark and full of pain and sufferingI am a bad person because this ticked all my boxes I loved seeing the transformation of Prisoner 374215 from the man he was to the man they made him and thanks to the little epilogue into something than that at the end Another fantastic LHNB story and you guys it's free


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